Sophie, an 18-year-old college student, calls her younger brother Liam when she’s homesick and discovers a family in strife. Sophie believes she needs a thankfulness and collaboration lesson after seeing her mother suffer silently under her father’s criticism.
Homesickness creeps up on you when you least expect it, clutching your heart with frigid fingers till you scream for home.
Sophie felt like way after three months at college. It was my longest time away from home, and each day seemed forever without my family’s turmoil.
I called my ten-year-old younger brother, Liam, one day, struck with nostalgia. He always brought purity and excitement to our family, and hearing his voice could brighten any day.
I said, “Hey, champ,” my boyhood nickname for him. “I miss you a lot. Is my favorite tiny guy okay?
Liam’s excited, surprised voice came over the phone. “Soph! Miss you too! College is distant. When are you returning?
It seemed like we spoke for hours. Liam’s continuous college queries and my efforts to depict my dull routine in the most intriguing manner filled the gap. After turning the discussion toward home, a nagging sense pulled at my heart despite the laughing and anecdotes.
“What’s up back there? Are Mom and Dad okay? To seem casual, I asked.
Liam’s voice stopped unexpectedly. It’s alright, I suppose. However, I hope you could visit.”
Despite their innocence, his statements alarmed me. Liam never minced words, but his tone indicated he was hiding something. I stayed awake that night, repeating the discussion, homesick and worried.
I finished all my academic work early and packed my luggage for an unplanned vacation home to shake off the unease. The notion of seeing my family again, embracing my little brother, and eating with my parents excited me as I hadn’t in weeks.
Returning was a whirl of eagerness and fear. Liam didn’t tell me what? Why was his voice heavier than ever?
Entering my childhood home’s turmoil was both comforting and shocking. The home, filled with laughing and disputes, welcomed me back. On one of these typical family nights, I heard Dad’s harsh voice break through the noise.
“… Karen, why is supper cold again? Can’t you do anything?
The words halted me, my heart falling. In the kitchen, Mom had her back to me, shoulders lowered like they were carrying the world.
I saw Liam sitting at the kitchen table, looking uncomfortable and resigned. His face seemed new to me, and it froze me to the bone.
I closed the door and sat on the bed with Liam in his room later. “Hey, champ,” I said softly but firmly. “What’s up with Dad and Mom? I heard him earlier…”
Liam shuffled uneasily, looking away before meeting mine again. “Soph, it’s been difficult. Dad is continuously bugging Mom. Like if supper is cold or he spots a dust particle on the carpet. Dad complains about everything Mom does—cooking, cleaning, washing.
After Liam said that, I realized the situation. The thought of my vivacious, energetic mother being constantly criticized was painful. Right then, I resolved to fix things and show Dad his mistakes.
Inspired by fury, I planned. I thought it would help Dad see his mistake and restore balance and gratitude in our family.
My strategy began with a big, deceptive deed. Waiting till Dad was home, I took a deep breath to calm my anxieties and called him.
“Hello?” Dad spoke with astonishment.
“Dad, it’s me,” I said, shaking to be upset. Am in the ER. The situation is dire. Need Mom here.”
Instant terror in his voice. “What? What happened? Your mom and I will be there—”
“No, Dad, send Mom. Please. “I need her,” I said, hoping my performance was genuine.
Dad consented after a few rushed promises and frightened queries, and I hung up, my heart racing from the lie and what to do next.
I promptly wrote Mom to explain my lie. No worries, mom—I’m not in the ER. Dad believes I am and will tell you to come. Don’t. I arranged a trip for you. You deserve rest. Let’s show Dad your daily juggling.”
I hesitated before pressing send, confirming our deceit and hope agreement.
Mom looked confused and incredulous, but she knew my urgency. “Soph, are you sure? What about you and Liam?
Mom, trust me. Dad needs to learn. Liam and I’ll be alright. Enjoy your break—you deserve it.”
The following day was hectic. Dad called Mom more frantically, pleading for her return. Mom vowed to return “in the evening,” boosting Dad’s hopes and desperation.
When nightfall arrived, I entered, not Mom. Dad’s face grew pale as he saw my health, confused and relieved.
“Where’s your mother?” he inquired, strained.
“She’s taking a well-deserved break,” I insist, stepping over a toy car. “You and I are alone for a few days. Dad, we need to discuss.
I never imagined I would see defeat in the house’s chaos—clothes soiled with today’s escapades, toys strewn like landmines. Dad slumped on a chair, stunned by the world he had taken for granted.
“I didn’t realize how much work this was,” he said, surveying the chaos. Can’t keep up with everything.”
“That’s the point, Dad,” I sat across from him. “Mom does this daily without complaint. She binds us together and deserves more than criticism for a cold supper or dirty carpet.”
The days that followed enlightened Dad. Under my supervision, he saw the complexity and work underlying our household’s smooth operation. Dad saw Mom’s everyday routine, from washing to cooking to controlling Liam’s enthusiasm.
Mom returned to a family full of admiration and respect, albeit not flawless. Dad approached her with an air of humility and newfound understanding as she entered the somewhat chaotic but tranquil situation.
“Karen,” he said, gentler than I had heard in a while, “I can’t begin to express how much I’ve missed you, but more importantly, how much I’ve realized the weight of what you do for us every day.”
Mom hesitated, inquisitive but wary. “Mark, what’s up?”
Dad said, “These past few days have been… enlightening,” holding her hands. The everyday chores and problems you confront never truly impressed me. Your management is graceful and efficient. I apologize for not noticing it sooner, not doing more, and for my unfair criticism.”
Mom gripped his hands back, her eyes softening and glistening. “Thanks, Mark. That means more to me than you know.”
Meanwhile, Liam and I glanced in quiet joy of our plan’s accomplishment. After the evening settled, Liam and I had a moment alone.
“Soph,” Liam replied, grinning, “we did it, didn’t we?”
“We sure did, champ,” I said, ruffling his hair. Thank you for being courageous and honest. Yeah, we’re a terrific team.”
With pride, Liam smiled wider. Yes, we do.”
Dad then grabbed me aside, looking serious. “Soph, I apologize and thank you. I needed to learn from your actions, while they were difficult. You taught me about family and teamwork.”
I embraced him, removing misunderstandings. It was a team effort, Dad. We all learnt something important.”
It felt lighter, warmer, and more connected when our family assembled that night. We laughed, spoke, and listened for the first time in a while. The experience that began as a frantic desire to change became a lovely lesson in respect, collaboration, and love.
I understood that our family, like many others, had faults and issues after reflecting on everything. We characterized ourselves by our willingness to face and learn from those difficulties.
The hectic days that appeared so overwhelming at the start had taught us love and respect, making us stronger and more bonded.



